I can’t fault the author but 80% of the paragraphs in Timmy Failure are one sentence, and most of the rest are two sentences.
We're all in trouble when we can't tell the good guys from the bad.
But tell that to the photographers that surround the entrance to the hotel.
And tell it to the crowd of onlookers who want a glimpse.
And tell it to the police who try in vain to clear a path.
For the bad guy.
Who at precisely 9:07 p.m. is escorted out of the revolving glass doors of the hotel to an explosion of flashbulbs.
The lingering effect of which produces a bright ball of light in the center of his gaze.
Making it impossible to see the faces of the surging crowd.
As a cop shoves a photographer. And someone screams. And a woman faints.
That’s from “A shocking prologue that if all goes right will make you want to read the rest of this book”.